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**nightwach** · 20-10-2005 22:06

Incep .. pt k am propus ideea..... pls make this sticky

Don't deny your feelings,
Don't deny your thoughts,
'Cause you're the one that fought,
It's stupid to be modest. It all begins

With tryin' to play your part.
And it all ends up when you'll
Be ripped appart.
So, now you see, now you feel

The anger, and fear that comes
From the things that they do
So I'm not fooling you
But, I'll try to be the one that ban's

The things I think they're not right
For you. Enlarge your feelings and sight
And see what's bad for you,
Belive in me.

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**elske_deg** · 20-10-2005 22:37

Mesaj iniţiat de nightwach

Don't deny your feelings,
Don't deny your thoughts,
'Cause you're the one that fought,
It's stupid to be modest. It all begins

With tryin' to play your part.
And it all ends up when you'll
Be ripped appart.
So, now you see, now you feel

The anger, and fear that comes
From the things that they do
So I'm not fooling you
But, I'll try to be the one that ban's

The things I think they're not right
For you. Enlarge your feelings and sight
And see what's bad for you,
Belive in me.

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hmz.. adica sa nu-ti negi sentimentele si gandurile pentru ca tu te-ai gandit ca este stupid sa fii modest.. prima chiestie care imi sare in

ar fi ... cum sa te gandesti ca este stupid sa fii modest daca tu iti negai gandurile in prima instanta... ma rog asta e mai mult o chiestie de nuanta.. se poate trece usor peste.
observ aici aluzie la acea sublima "inteligenta emotionala", din moment ce vorbesti despre stupiditatea modestiei in sentimente...
in a doua strofa vorbesti despre un "inceput" si despre un "sfarsit", amandoua prezentandu-se "apotechotic" -daca pot sa spun asa- .. dupa aceea spui ca tu-eul liric- vei fi cel care il va proteja pe un "el" oarecare(cel putin asa se intelege) de lucrurile rele din lumea asta, pentru ca la sfarsit sa il sfatuiesti tot pe "el" sa vada ce e de fapt rau in lumea asta.
colac peste pupaza un : belive me pus acolo probabil la deruta adversarului... sa cred ce? ai spus ceva? daca da, eu nu am inteles nimic.

un mare talmes-balmes....

later edit: intre "inceputul" si "sfarsitul" mentionate de tine ar trebui sa existe un intreg univers, o intreaga lume de tortura brutal de sublima... pe cand la tine, tot acest zbucium este rezumat la "lucrurile pe care le spun ei"... cam .... "fugarita" aceasta explicatie -oh, voi, academicieni, scuzati-mi rogu-va aceasta blasfemizare a "vorbei bune"-

later later edit: sunt sigur ca nici Eminescu didn't get it right the first time

. sa mai vedem alte incercari, sper eu, mai bune

**nightwach** · 21-10-2005 16:27

ca sa nu ramaneti in pom si topicu asta nepopulat ..continui

Impale
Hate my love in death, and fail
To see that I care.Imaple
All that I hate and try
To catch my soul before I fly.

Again in sorrow,
Again in pain,
To take and borrow
My hearth again.

See that I care,
See that I fought,
See that I dare,
See that I thaught.

Drink my blood,
Drain my vains,
Put my body in chains
And chop me to flood

With blood all the floor
To shed in the core
Of civilization, and fail
To show my feelings.Impale.

va rog scuzati eventualele greseli de tipar

**IMPERIAL** · 21-10-2005 17:05

Scuzati-mi off-topic-ul
nightwatch,
din cate mi-am dat eu seama esti roman, de ce nu compui poezii si in limba romana, limba natala ? eu stiu ca engleza e la moda, e limba aproape universala, etc. /insa romanu tot roman ramane, incearca sa faci un beneficiu tarii, ca poate cine stie ce Eminescu Nr. 2 devii

**nightwach** · 22-10-2005 14:26

hai mai...nu umplu eu tot threadu asta

...haideti si voi .... astept poezii si poetii

... intre timp ... inca doua de la mine

I don't deserve your love
I don't deserve your smile
But in love my dove
It will take a while
To earn your trust
To learn your love
Don't leave me so fast
'Cause I'll die,my love
*.*
I should yell at you
I should try to make you cry
But my sprit's new
So I'm 'bout to fly.

F*** you and die
So kill yourself and view
The shed of your blood.New
To this feeling,so why

Didn't you try it sooner?
It would have been better
So I wouldn't have slaughetred
My heart.

**nightwach** · 23-10-2005 14:14

hai si voi .... creatii cva... 2-3-4 versuri acolo ... nu e greu

.... va mai bag eu una-doua

intre timp

I'm blind , but still I see,
I'm poor, but rich may be,
I'm deph, but still i hear so well
I swear to kill you soon my dear!
*.*
I shall seek the blood and pain,
You shall search for me again,
I shall kill and suffer much,
To love in search for you,
Travell with fear to get in touch,
To see and bend your will!

**tajka** · 23-10-2005 17:47

Foaie verde şi-o lalea
Plin de englezi sadea
Pe româneşte nu mai ştim
Mai deloc ca să gândim
Ardem în engeză-n draci
Cică suntem tari în craci
Ai de zis ceva măi dragă
Aici în română bagă
Foaie verde şi-un sonet
Românul s-a născut poet
Bagă poiezii la greu
Strofe-ntregi cu mult tupeu
Tot ce vine des la gură
O mai iau şi pe-arătură
La offtopic , nou subiect
Poiezie , intelect
Te ţine rime să găseşti ?
Ochii-acolo să beleşti
Lume multă să se-adune
Să scrie poezii bune
Foaie verde cap de mort
Scrisai poezie cât un tort
Că engleză nu prea ştiu
Ca să fiu şi eu zbanghiu
Să zică lumea că-s deştept
A lu' Şecspir mare-adept
Sau să scriu un teatru o dramă
Lumea să stea panaramă
Foaie verde şi-o găină
Mă urc acuma în maşină
Mă duc să mă răcoresc
Cred că-ncep să mă prostesc
Până mâine îmi revin
Numa dacă beau un vin
Sau o bere blondă amară
Undeva să stau afară
Pe la vreo terasă plină
Acum cât mai e lumină
Poezia aş contiuna
Dar vine nevastă-mea
Şi mă pune să muncesc
Cică să nu ruginesc
Foaie verde cap de porc
Să trăiţi până mă-ntorc
Şi-ncă 70 de veri
Să ajungeţi pionieri

**F4bian** · 23-10-2005 18:22

Am si io una..se vrea a fi mai mult un cantec

Te iubesc, te doresc pana o sa-imbatranesc
Vreau cu tine s-am copii
Si ei sa are bucurii
Am masini de'alea bengoase
Umblu doar cu babaroase
Am in casa verzisori
Nu ca voi de foame muritori
Stiu ca ascultati doar rock
D'aia nu va-nghit deloc
..........................
Tocanitza de gazete...

O sa-l sun pe Gutza sa vad poate o sa devina si o piesa

**tajka** · 23-10-2005 20:37

Frate nightwach zic mereu
Să scrii-n română nu e greu
Poate doar umpic ciudat
În engleză de-i redactat
Deşi mai ştiu şi eu câtva
Să citez englezi sadea
Eu tot în română vorbesc
În americană mai greşesc ...
Iar dacă tu ştii mai bine
Să găseşti rime depline
În engleză , nu-i nimic
Scrie aici , nu pe un plic
F4bian dacă doreşti
Poţi manele să-ncropeşti
Poate se inspiră Guţă
Ce se trage din maimuţă
Poate chiar salam cel tare
Care face gura mare
Adrian cel mititel
Ştie versuri ca un chel
Foaie verde de gândac
Mie îmi vine să mă car
Că am scris destul aici
Mai lăsăm şi pe alţi amici

**young_noble** · 25-10-2005 14:17

fuck you,for starin at me
look away,there's nuttin to see
whot told ya to look in my direction
whot told ya it's my fault cuz you don't get an erection
you're stupid man,you got no skills
really,take it easy with the pills
they're bad for you,you know that
but you're a born loser and that's a fact
you can't even rhyme
you're stuck in your mind
"what's the time?"but you already asked me before
it's time for me to kick your ass some more
why are you afraid?come on,act like a man
you can't win this battle,why don't you understand?
it's simple:i'm your master and you're my slave
i'ma keep rhymin till i put ya in your grave

**young_noble** · 25-10-2005 14:39

fiecare rimeaza in ce limba vrea
poate ca pt unii engleza e un pic mai grea
sa nu va simtiti jigniti,fiindca nu e intentia mea
fiecare asculta ce-i face placere
ce-l face sa uite pe moment de durere
rock,manele,dance,hip-hop
insa nu poti compara pe nimeni cu tupac
ca sa scrii ce a scris el,tre' sa ai ceva in cap
uite nightwatch,ca se poate si in limba natala
si n-a fost nevoie de nici o aptitudine speciala
io m-am descurcat,poate o sa reusesti si tu
this is an atack that i'm launchin to you

**nightwach** · 25-10-2005 17:47

Ms pt provocare young_noble
Dar, nush ma domne
K mie imi place engleza
k na...e grea japoneza
Fac si eu vers knd imi vine
Si incerc sa-l fac mai bine.
In engleza o sa fac,in mare parte
Pentru ca poate'o sa fac vreo carte
Si prinde mai bine engleza
Decat japoneza sau franceza

**young_noble** · 25-10-2005 18:08

Mesaj iniţiat de nightwach

Ms pt provocare young_noble
Dar, nush ma domne
K mie imi place engleza
k na...e grea japoneza
Fac si eu vers knd imi vine
Si incerc sa-l fac mai bine.
In engleza o sa fac,in mare parte
Pentru ca poate'o sa fac vreo carte
Si prinde mai bine engleza
Decat japoneza sau franceza

mda...nu stiu acum ce sa zic
faci ce vrei,nu mai esti un copilas mic
english is allright with me 2
i like it,maybe more than u
so,keep doin what u do
i'ma keep doin what i know
sorry,but now i gotta go

just kiddin,don't believe that shit
i'm only goin to the kitchen to eat

**young_noble** · 25-10-2005 21:18

i'm waitin,but i still didn't get no reply
put the pen on the paper,if you feel you wanna cry
it's just so damn easy,don't ask me why
quit fuckin around
get up,don't let your face hit the ground
if it happened once,make sure it doesn't happen again
even if you are screwed by your best friend
remember you're not alone on this land
there are many mothers fuckers just like you
who still haven't figured out what they wanna do

**young_noble** · 26-10-2005 17:49

today we lost
we lost a game and our trust
i know it's not for the first time
but it still hurts inside
there's nobody here to cheer me up
she's gone,but i don't give a fuck
we never got along
and it would be wrong
to say that i'm not listenin right now to a sad song
i'm not asahmed to admit it
it's my burden and i gotta live with it
we are all human,sometimes we suffer
we dive and sometimes we can't get out of the water
don't read this shit,you got somethin else to do
chances to be understood by others are few
but,hold on,i don't want that
you fucked me,now it's my turn to fuck you back
so i'm sayin good bye to all you bitches
you'll never know my true wishes

**nightwach** · 26-10-2005 21:40

All these days for nothin'
Just shoot me again and cut me !
I wasted my time on you
Next time i'll never play that fool!!
*.*
I shall search
And I shall see
Brutality sustains in me
Should kill,should thrust with open'd eyes
Shall find the path which forword layes!
*.*
The blood is on my hands again,
This time it's mine , begin
To shed it all, or drink,
I shall return or sink,
To view my work as planed,
And everyone shall kill on my demand!

**nightwach** · 27-10-2005 14:13

I want to see you suffer
I want to give you pain,
Well, F*** You. In vain
You moan and want another
Minute with me,
Well, F*** You, and let me be.

**young_noble** · 27-10-2005 14:53

i don't need school to make me rhyme
so i'm leavin this bitch behind
i'm sure one day i'll find
somebody to make me smile
and be happy,even it's for a short while
i'm not lookin for money,i'm sure they gonna come
i'm sellin my thoughts...you want some?
what did you do to my legs?i can't run
but,wait a minute...run from what,from who?
you're my friend,but i don't really know you
you keep it inside,like i do
but that's not right
you must fight
i'm not usin this as a stereotype
you may think that,but i'm not
ok,it's time for me to stop

**nightwach** · 28-10-2005 15:55

Every one had fun,
WTF*ck?
I stood like a f***in' duck.
At least there was no sun.
It was dark, so I
Liked that, 'cause
You wonder why,
In that light, the noise
Becomes louder
Every one's older,
And you look much better,
And your girl is ...beautyful...
It's 'cause the light,
Wake up, go out
And pray that you didn't do
A f**kin' mistake,
Look at her.... does she make
The world seem better?
If yes, than you're alright, for now...